I Edited Journey Inside A Dangerous Mind. It flows a lot better and I fixed some major errors. Please read it again error free, and please point out errors that you see so I can fix them. I urge you all to at least read Chapter 6 again. I added an extra scene to it that I think is interesting. It is set in the third dimension right after Jin hires Julia.
I am currently working on my next chapter. It'll be the biggest one yet. I hope to cover the entire fourth tournament in it.
Inside A Dangerous Mind
Devious Comments
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I'm anti Xiaoyu and Hwoarang all the way! They are so full of fail!
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JinJulia is made of pure win!
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I'm anti Xiaoyu and Hwoarang all the way! They are so full of fail!
Support this FC, it spreads the truth ==> [link]
JinJulia is made of pure win!
I'll re-read Chapter 6 shortly!
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-Cat
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I'll read chapter 6
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Como un beso prometido
a tu alma es mi voz.
Soy lo muerto y lo vivido
soy la calma, soy tu dios.
Cierra los ojos y te llevaré
donde los sueños se hacen canción.
La vida duele, te curaré
duérmete y sueña, te acuna mi voz...
I make of pretty much all the characters in this one.
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I'm anti Xiaoyu and Hwoarang all the way! They are so full of fail!
Support this FC, it spreads the truth ==> [link]
JinJulia is made of pure win!
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